Ignite presentation learner response

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1) Type up your feedback in full including the ratings out of five for each of the categories. 

Brilliant title, concept and characters - so much potential here. Casting for Jeffery works - can you cast an older banker though?

Sounds like you have some plans for what will be in the 3 minutes but more details on this would be good

Lots of great content but very rushed delivery and did not meet the requirements of the ignite presentation. Only 10 slides - that's actually only half of what was required - you could have left each slide up for twice the time and then wouldn't have had to rush the delivery

As a result, you missed out on quite a bit (or it was so rushed we lost track as an audience). Lack of media concepts and theories

It's a shame about the ignite because the basic idea has real potential

Q&A answered well and able to fill in some of the gaps missing in the presentation

Research (through presentation AND blog) - 3/5

TV drama concept (crime drama) - 4/5

Language: terminology and theory - 2/5

Representations - 1/5

Audience and industry - 1/5

Delivery - 2/5

Total out of 30 - 13/30

2) Use this feedback, comments from peers and your own reflection on your presentation to self-assess and write your own detailed WWW and EBI for your coursework concept and presentation as a whole.

WWW: Good, unique concept (cybercrime). Good title and tagline

EBI: Not enough slides. Too rushed.

3) Write a paragraph discussing how your presentation will lead into your actual coursework production. Do you need to update your statement of intent? Does your concept offer enough clarity? Is it appropriate for the audience specified in the brief? Is it achievable to film with the resources you have available? Can you add media terminology or theory to your statement of intent now you have reflected on your presentation and seen others?

My personal statement hasn't been written yet. Yes, the concept offers enough clarity. Yes, it is appropriate for the audience. Yes, it is achievable to film. Yes, I can apply Blumler & Katz uses and gratification theory, as people can identify with Jeffery as he is a secluded person.

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