Cinematography video feedback/learner response
1) Type up your feedback/comments from your teacher. Wow - where do I start? Incredible intertextuality, this feels like a production from the youtube/meme generation! Engaging and genuinely funny with plenty of effects. You also had a range of shots although not all were correctly labelled (the first garden shot was medium/long shot, not a wide shot) In terms of the brief, perhaps a lack of camera movement used. Editing - not the focus of this project but transitions broke the flow in places 2) Type up your feedback from fellow students. WWW: The opening shot google map and editing EBI: NPC music 3) Now reflect on your work and write your own summary of the comments and feedback you have received. Write three WWWs and three EBIs. WWW: Some variety of camera shots Strong narrative Strong editing EBI: Little to no camera movement Too long 4) L earner response: think about what you learned about cinematography making the video and also watching others. What will you do differently