Cinematography video feedback/learner response

1) Type up your feedback/comments from your teacher.

Wow - where do I start? Incredible intertextuality, this feels like a production from the youtube/meme generation!

Engaging and genuinely funny with plenty of effects. You also had a range of shots although not all were correctly labelled (the first garden shot was medium/long shot, not a wide shot)

In terms of the brief, perhaps a lack of camera movement used.

Editing - not the focus of this project but transitions broke the flow in places

2) Type up your feedback from fellow students.

WWW: The opening shot google map and editing

EBI: NPC music

3) Now reflect on your work and write your own summary of the comments and feedback you have received. Write three WWWs and three EBIs.

WWW: Some variety of camera shots

Strong narrative

Strong editing

EBI: Little to no camera movement

Too long

4) Learner response: think about what you learned about cinematography making the video and also watching others. What will you do differently when you start the coursework in the summer? What tips or tricks have you learned from others that you can use next time? Are there any specific aspects of camerawork that you need to revise or practice?

When I do the coursework I will make sure to use camera movement as well. I may also invest in a tripod to get accurate and stable camera shots. I will also film a little bit earlier before the deadline.