Mise-en-scene video feedback and learner response
1) Type up your feedback from your teacher in full. Movement and expression very good here - clearly inspired by the original. Nice recreation of the orange being thrown but a little obvious it was a ball My main comment here would be on locations in the local area that might have been closer to the original (e.g. market stall for the original) 2) Use the feedback you've been given to write your own self-assessment of your video using WWW (What Went Well) and EBI (Even Better If...) WWW: Good recreation to the original scene - props such as gloves and hoodie are accurate, also facial expressions and movement are accurate EBI: Should've used a ball instead of an orange, use of locations could've been better and accurate to the original 3) Now reflect on your own work in more detail. How did your planning help clarify and develop your ideas? We planned by watching back the reference scene and studying the facial expressions and seeing how this running style could be recreated